Clearer Writing: Dare to be Blue

Any idiot can write, and many do. The Internet is a literary soapbox open 24/7, after all and admission is free. (With all those words floating around in cyberspace, finding a good blog or an audience of non-Kool Aid drinkers can be tricky. :D ) Good writers are never satisfied with status quo; they push the envelope and their skills everyday.

How can this be better?  How can I draw the reader in? What can I cut? Is my writing clear enough, catchy enough, good enough?

Weeks ago I started a series on the 9 Steps to Clearer Writing, and got sidetracked. I pulled this stub of a post out last Friday and breathed a little life into it for today’s schedule. This is step 5 in the clear writing process.

Dare to be Blue

One of the saddest things in life is watching a person flounder in their own lack of self confidence. For one reason or another, they believe they are insignificant, unloved, unworthy. For many, the solution is to adapt the behaviors of another- one he or she views as having it all. In essence, they trade the unique body, mind, and spirit God created, for the shiny bauble dangling from another’s hand.

Some find the truth later on. Sadly, many never realize the smoke and mirrors of image are only illusions of happiness and success for the majority. We were not created to be cookie-cutter pictures of perfection.

“If you want your writing to be crystal clear, you need to shine like the Son.”

God equipped each of us with unique talents, quirks, and flaws; each one adding beauty to the whole. You will only find success once you embrace your uniqueness.

Dare to be blue when everyone else is yellow. The paint will always chip off and show your true color underneath when you try to imitate others.

Finding Your Voice

We all have people who influence us greatly. It’s human nature. We assimilate the behaviors of others into our own lives and grow from those experiences. (Even that abrasive guy at the desk next to you can serve as sandpaper to smooth out a few rough spots in your personality.) Being influenced by others is a good thing, as long as you find your own voice in the cacophony.

Marching to the beat of your own drummer creates a good rhythm for the song you were meant to sing. The greatest achievers in history were avant-garde by society’s standards.  Jesus was considered a rabble-rouser and unconventional to the extreme.

Do not conform any longer to the pattern of this world, but be transformed by the renewing of your mind. Then you will be able to test and approve what God’s will is–his good, pleasing and perfect will.”~ Romans 12:2

You matter.
You are loved just the way you are.
You are worthy of all the great things life has to offer.

Stop hiding behind the masks of others and let your strengths and flaws shine through in your writing. Imitating someone else’s style only muddles your own voice.

10 Responses to Clearer Writing: Dare to be Blue
  1. Lance
    November 11, 2008 | 1:43 pm

    “Happy Feet” – a great example of “dare to be blue” (or whatever your true color is)! It’s easy to say…harder to do…

    Why?

    Maybe (for me) a fear of being “different”. And I know, Jamie, different is what we all are. No two people are alike. Maybe it’s the vulnerability that’s there. Still…

    All this said, I am getting much better at chipping away the colors that are just painted on “over the top”.

    And, to a large degree, writing is what is getting me there. Clearer writing. Writing that speaks “me”. It’s been a journey of getting here, of feeling comfortable here. And it is also freeing to have gotten here (although “here” is not the end – the journey continues)…as it does for all of us…it’s just a matter of which directions our journey is taking us in…I’m going for authentic…and real…

    Even if that means dancing when the world say I “should” sing…(and you don’t want to hear me sing!)

    Lance´s last spectacular blog post..Believe In Yourself

  2. Lance
    November 11, 2008 | 8:43 am

    “Happy Feet” – a great example of “dare to be blue” (or whatever your true color is)! It’s easy to say…harder to do…

    Why?

    Maybe (for me) a fear of being “different”. And I know, Jamie, different is what we all are. No two people are alike. Maybe it’s the vulnerability that’s there. Still…

    All this said, I am getting much better at chipping away the colors that are just painted on “over the top”.

    And, to a large degree, writing is what is getting me there. Clearer writing. Writing that speaks “me”. It’s been a journey of getting here, of feeling comfortable here. And it is also freeing to have gotten here (although “here” is not the end – the journey continues)…as it does for all of us…it’s just a matter of which directions our journey is taking us in…I’m going for authentic…and real…

    Even if that means dancing when the world say I “should” sing…(and you don’t want to hear me sing!)

    Lance´s last spectacular blog post..Believe In Yourself

  3. Jamie Simmerman
    November 11, 2008 | 3:19 pm

    Lance, I like your different. Sing all you want here. I’ll bellow with you :)

  4. Jamie
    November 11, 2008 | 10:19 am

    Lance, I like your different. Sing all you want here. I’ll bellow with you :)

  5. Scott
    November 11, 2008 | 10:34 am

    First…let me say, I gave up on the Kool Aid after that last big party I attended. :)

    I just wanted to say thanks. Just when I needed to hear it, you stuck it out there.

    I’ve been trying to find my influence and voice since I started The Ever-Changing Thought. I missed it. Several times I missed it, until recently. You have just drove the point on home, made it more meaningful, more OK. I don’t want to be like “the world’ and I won’t. God IS my influence. I should have known, there’s NO way I could do this on my own.

    -Scott

    Scott´s last spectacular blog post..What Is My Purpose

  6. Writer Dad
    November 11, 2008 | 3:50 pm

    Nothing is more important (for a writer) than finding our voice, and nothing can get us their (in my opinion) faster than confidence. Writer Dad did that for me; validated everything Daisy had told me for so many years. I thank the audience every day, because I truly have no idea where I’d be without them.

    Writer Dad´s last spectacular blog post..Bright Ideas

  7. Writer Dad
    November 11, 2008 | 10:50 am

    Nothing is more important (for a writer) than finding our voice, and nothing can get us their (in my opinion) faster than confidence. Writer Dad did that for me; validated everything Daisy had told me for so many years. I thank the audience every day, because I truly have no idea where I’d be without them.

    Writer Dad´s last spectacular blog post..Bright Ideas

  8. Jamie Simmerman
    November 11, 2008 | 4:17 pm

    Scott, :D Glad you’re finding your way. Hang in there.

    Sean, confidence is a big sticking point for some. I had great coaches along the way who believed in me. That helped more than I can describe.

  9. Jamie
    November 11, 2008 | 11:17 am

    Scott, :D Glad you’re finding your way. Hang in there.

    Sean, confidence is a big sticking point for some. I had great coaches along the way who believed in me. That helped more than I can describe.

  10. Scott
    January 6, 2010 | 8:15 pm

    First…let me say, I gave up on the Kool Aid after that last big party I attended. :)

    I just wanted to say thanks. Just when I needed to hear it, you stuck it out there.

    I've been trying to find my influence and voice since I started The Ever-Changing Thought. I missed it. Several times I missed it, until recently. You have just drove the point on home, made it more meaningful, more OK. I don't want to be like “the world' and I won't. God IS my influence. I should have known, there's NO way I could do this on my own.

    -Scott

    <abbr>Scott´s last spectacular blog post..What Is My Purpose</abbr>

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