3 Steps to Improving Your Writing

Okay, because I’m twit-tarded (as Michael Martine calls it), and set two posts to publish for yesterday and none for today, this is your bonus post. :D

Ah, so what to talk about today? Good question.

I got an interesting email from a new writer this week. He asked what he could do to make his writing better. I think this is a question that haunts all even seasoned veterans (unless you are super-confident, cocky, and think your wordsmithing is brilliant, of unparalleled quality, and unappreciated by the masses.)  I block out hours every week to dedicated to improving my writing, For me, it could always be better.

The answer I sent was a combination of preveious advice, my personal reading, and experience.

3 Steps to Improving Your Writing

Rewrite Great Authors

One of my favorite ways to improve my writing comes from James and Harry (I know, big surprise.) I think it was James who recommended choosing a writer you emulate, and rewriting their work. This makes you examine things like timing, word groups, adjective placement, and rythm. You take something great and change the tone, or transform it into a differnt creature of equal value. By picking apart an article or paragraph, you learn how the thing was constructed. Then you have a blueprint for constructing a similar peice in your own words.

This concept applies to nearly any trade; painting, Web design, car repair, teaching, music.

Read Like a Writer

Another way to improve your writing is to read like a writer. Don’t just read the words on the page, ask “Why is that sentence there? Is it a transition? Is it foreshadowing? What purpose does it serve in the journey the writer is creating?” Examine every line, every word, until you understand why it was written. Read for enjoyment, but also notice how your favorite author inserts a period of calm right before the big dramatic scene where the heroine is left dangling over a pit of snapping alligators.

Push Your Limits

Be well-rounded, even when it hurts. I hate sappy romance novels. I snorted at women who stood in the romance section and selected armfuls of books with bare chested men and dewy eyed women on the covers. “Get a life. Romance is self delusional, ” I thought. But then I was asked to write a romantic short story. So I ordered and read a box full of LoveSwept Novels by Iris Johansen.

And you know what? I didn’t puke and I only rolled my eyes on occasion. I actually enjoyed most of them because Iris writes good suspense and her stories were well structured. The characters were likable and the plot wasn’t too far-fetched (most of the time).

My venture into writing and reading outside my comfort zone lead to a book idea. I think it’s brilliant. I have the outline completed, and plan to start the hard-core writing in 4 weeks. It will be my first submission to print media, which is also outside my comfort zone. :)

The Bottom Line

The secret to improving your writing is to put words on paper (or the screen, if you prefer). There are no short cuts, no compter program can do it for you. You simply must write. Write everyday and write in ways that are outside your comfort zone. Push a little every week and you will see growth over time. If you stay in your comfortable rut your writing will only grow stagnant and dull.

12 Responses to 3 Steps to Improving Your Writing
  1. Writer Dad
    November 21, 2008 | 7:01 pm

    In the last month, I’ve had about a dozen emails asking what software I use to write. The questions are always various versions of “What application can I use to help me write like that?” None. Your tips are great. Good writers write constantly, paying attention to everything, including the tossed off emails they send. I love the advice of rewriting a favorite author. I think I might try that.

    Writing like life, or anything else worth mastering, is never finished. You must always improve or the skill may as well lie on its deathbed. My daughter has studied the violin since she was three. She uses the Suzuki method. Dr. Suzuki says, “Until you can do something ten-thousand times, it is not yet a skill. When you can, it is a beginning.”

    Writer Dad´s last spectacular blog post..Redbook… An Excerpt

  2. Writer Dad
    November 21, 2008 | 2:01 pm

    In the last month, I’ve had about a dozen emails asking what software I use to write. The questions are always various versions of “What application can I use to help me write like that?” None. Your tips are great. Good writers write constantly, paying attention to everything, including the tossed off emails they send. I love the advice of rewriting a favorite author. I think I might try that.

    Writing like life, or anything else worth mastering, is never finished. You must always improve or the skill may as well lie on its deathbed. My daughter has studied the violin since she was three. She uses the Suzuki method. Dr. Suzuki says, “Until you can do something ten-thousand times, it is not yet a skill. When you can, it is a beginning.”

    Writer Dad´s last spectacular blog post..Redbook… An Excerpt

  3. Lance
    November 21, 2008 | 7:18 pm

    So, Jamie – you didn’t convince me to go out and buy any “smut” – as I tell my wife when she bring home one of those books (to her credit she’s well-rounded, and really reads from many genres – way more than I do!).

    But I get your point…don’t judge a book by it’s cover. Is that your point? Maybe? Maybe I get your point. Well, now as I re-read it, I think your saying we should be well-rounded. I’ll take that. I’m probably not…(well-rounded, that is).

    And…I should write more – even if it’s stuff I don’t put “out there”.

    And…I should really look at how other writers “write”.

    You’re beating me up today Jamie!! I have loads of stuff I can (should) work on.

    Arghh! (and … thank you.)

    Lance´s last spectacular blog post..Don’t Worry, Be Happy

  4. Lance
    November 21, 2008 | 2:18 pm

    So, Jamie – you didn’t convince me to go out and buy any “smut” – as I tell my wife when she bring home one of those books (to her credit she’s well-rounded, and really reads from many genres – way more than I do!).

    But I get your point…don’t judge a book by it’s cover. Is that your point? Maybe? Maybe I get your point. Well, now as I re-read it, I think your saying we should be well-rounded. I’ll take that. I’m probably not…(well-rounded, that is).

    And…I should write more – even if it’s stuff I don’t put “out there”.

    And…I should really look at how other writers “write”.

    You’re beating me up today Jamie!! I have loads of stuff I can (should) work on.

    Arghh! (and … thank you.)

    Lance´s last spectacular blog post..Don’t Worry, Be Happy

  5. Jamie Simmerman
    November 21, 2008 | 8:24 pm

    :D Lance, dude, I would never beat up on you intentionally, unless you needed it.

    And no, I still not recommend reading smut, but at least I now have an appreciation for it. At least the well-written kind. Maybe you should write a racy story for your wife, eh?

  6. Jamie
    November 21, 2008 | 3:24 pm

    :D Lance, dude, I would never beat up on you intentionally, unless you needed it.

    And no, I still not recommend reading smut, but at least I now have an appreciation for it. At least the well-written kind. Maybe you should write a racy story for your wife, eh?

  7. Jamie
    November 21, 2008 | 3:28 pm

    Sean, I think some people assume there’s some magic combination or trick program that makes a good writer.

    I watched that movie with Meryl Streep the other night. Can’t remember the name, but she teaches violin to inner-city kids. I don’t watch tv often, but I was glad I stayed up to watch it. Makes me want to learn to play the violin. :)

  8. Lance
    November 21, 2008 | 10:23 pm

    Jamie,
    I need to be beat up every once in a while…you did good….

    The racy story…well…I’m not going there anytime soon!!

    Lance´s last spectacular blog post..Don’t Worry, Be Happy

  9. Lance
    November 21, 2008 | 5:23 pm

    Jamie,
    I need to be beat up every once in a while…you did good….

    The racy story…well…I’m not going there anytime soon!!

    Lance´s last spectacular blog post..Don’t Worry, Be Happy

  10. Jamie Simmerman
    November 22, 2008 | 4:06 am

    :D I couldn’t bring myself to do it either, Lance.

  11. Jamie
    November 21, 2008 | 11:06 pm

    :D I couldn’t bring myself to do it either, Lance.

  12. Jamie
    January 6, 2010 | 8:15 pm

    Sean, I think some people assume there's some magic combination or trick program that makes a good writer.

    I watched that movie with Meryl Streep the other night. Can't remember the name, but she teaches violin to inner-city kids. I don't watch tv often, but I was glad I stayed up to watch it. Makes me want to learn to play the violin. :)

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